Monday, 15 November 2010

REVIEW: Drafting text

We started working on how to write our review getting ideas from other reviews. We had to think about ways to make it interesting and still incorporating the usual conventions. This is our first draft that we came up with:

RELEASED: 20th May 2011 CERTIFICATE 15 DIRECTOR Hayley Hyde CAST Hayley Hyde, Sally Huddleston RUNNING TIME 5 mins PLOT Innocent Lacey {Hayley Hyde} is very happy with her life and has lots of friends. But one day takes a turn when the laughter becomes a disaster. Lacey soon realises that life isn't as straight forward as what it seems. It is sometimes a little twisted.

INTRODUCING Hayley Hyde and Sally Huddleston - both involved in the whole creative process as well as starring in their own 'Twisted' film. Their creation gives an insight into the lives of college student, as they dig deep into emotions and contrasts to give viewers a unique perspective of life. The new actresses on the scene unmask these memorable first characters with whom anyone can relate. The drastic change in character shows who one event can 'twist' a person's entire being, both inside and out. In an interview, with the girls we asked "What were you trying to show to people through your film?" They responded with saying that "the film is about showing how the smallest little thing like an argument can have a huge effect on someone and what they might do because some people ignore it as they don't understand how bad it can get".

VERDICT A creative and inspiring piece, these up and coming teens have already left their mark in the industry with an insight to the complex life of a teen in school and a subject that many people have experienced, bullying. But the 'twist' is who is the one that is reasonable for everything that happens? In fact , who is the problem here? ****

This being only a draft had many changes to it before it was used in our review

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